persuade writting

Term 1 2017

Persuade Writing:        It is wrong to fight.

What do you think? Do you agree or disagree? Are there ideas to support both sides of this topic? Write to persuade your reader of your ideas.

Planning (5 min) minutes)

Key Ideas

It is wrong to fight at school because it could cause serious injuries.

It is also bad to fight at school because you could kill someone.

Writing Space (write your persuasive writing below this heading 40 minutes)                          

Why it ain’t good to fight at school and how could stop it.

I have a few reason why it ain’t good to fight at school and what could happen.

Firstly, It is wrong to fight at school because it could cause serious injuries, or even kill someone. Fighting at school could also start bullying. Secondly, we could also stop it before it even gets to that point. To do that is to be brave and stop it. Thirdly, you can’t take control of yourself.

Fourthly, we should stop fighting at school. We serious have to stop fighting at school. what if someone bigger than you bullies you then more people bully you.

in summary, Just try stop fighting at school because when you fighting at school a lot of thing could happen.

Rubric Score Element	Ideas	Structure	Organisation	Vocabulary	Sentence	Punctuation	Spelling